Strolling back home
With my back pack and smiles drawn on my face
My hands swinging in fluky motion
And jumps and hops with my feet down the road
I took a long pause for what i saw
My home, my world, my mum
All gone!
My smiling face now drawn in dismay
In deep nostalgia i grieve and hope to have you again
I’m only 10 to be my own mother and friend
You were my sunrise you were my blessing
My soul yearns for your deeds again
The kisses before bed time
The lullabies sung
The warmth of your embrace
I want it all back
So i sit on this prosaic ground
Reminiscing my sheepish smile
The smile that limns your love for me
I want you back
๑•ิ.•ั๑
O poema é triste mas muito lindo também, e reflete as mudanças constantes em nossas vidas cheias de momentos, mas o que não muda nunca são nossas esperanças.
Que hoje nossos corações se encham de gratidão pelas bençãos que Deus nos oferece.
Beijos de chocolate e muito mais amor e paz! ◕‿-。
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Nice .. keep posting
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Sim, planejei intencionalmente tornar este poema um trágico. Obrigado por você, comentário e tempo gasto na leitura do meu poema.
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Thank you
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I loved the poem!👍
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Beautiful 💝
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Beautiful n touching
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Thank you kriti
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Thank you Anita
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Thank you. I’m glad you love it
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It’s moving.
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Awwn. Thank you
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I’ve really enjoyed your blog and nominated you for the Liebster Award! You can check it out here 🙂 https://themicroread.com/2017/11/03/liebster-award/ ❤
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Awwn thank you
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Hi Ken, what a moving poem you have written!
I would like to clarify whether it is your own mother that is being referred to in your poem, or a symbolic motherly figure cast as the central character in the poem.
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Lol thank you very much. I wrote the poem out of thoughts. The poem is to portray a picture about everything a mother could be to us, a friend, the whole world and an irreplaceable blessing.
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Very lovely.
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Thank you.
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Beautiful 😃
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Very moving.
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Thank you
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Thank you Esther
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It’s great having a mother. Mothers are gold indeed! Thanks for writing a tribute to a very good mother.
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Thank you for your beautiful comment.
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You’re welcome.
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So moving
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Thank you Nelly
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Such pain in those few words. Amazing poem dear.
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Thank you 😊
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